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Post by nell on Sept 10, 2009 16:50:11 GMT -5
The first part of my story is up on the stories page on the website. It's loosely based on my actual diary, although I changed a lot as well, because I don't want details of my real life to be on an erotica site. Also, I'm trying to add dialogue to make it more interesting.
FYI: I'm definitely working on my self-esteem
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Sept 10, 2009 17:28:07 GMT -5
I love what you've got so far.
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Post by Triassic on Sept 10, 2009 17:59:17 GMT -5
good job. i especially like the line about when a pretty girl can't get a date, they make a movie about it-but for an ugly girl, it's pathetic...
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Post by Phil on Sept 10, 2009 18:23:09 GMT -5
It's very good.
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Post by nell on Sept 10, 2009 19:13:18 GMT -5
Thanks! I appreciate the compliments.
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Post by BA on Sept 10, 2009 19:52:21 GMT -5
Wonderful, keep it going!
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Post by canadiandev on Sept 12, 2009 0:14:36 GMT -5
Enjoying it so far - keep going! Love the self-deprecating humour.
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Post by nell on Sept 13, 2009 7:00:06 GMT -5
An update to the story has been posted. Check it out! Feedback appreciated as always.
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Post by nell on Sept 15, 2009 14:43:44 GMT -5
One more bit is posted. I wanted to get it written before a crunch at work.
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Post by §cαrL£t on Sept 16, 2009 4:55:15 GMT -5
I kind of wish my name was Anastasia.
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Sept 16, 2009 7:29:24 GMT -5
I love the name Anastasia, too, Scarlet. I once name one of those dolls that come with a birth certificate Anastasia.
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Post by fang79 on Sept 19, 2009 8:06:15 GMT -5
Oh My God!!! Please, please, please update it soon! I love this story!!!
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Post by BA on Sept 19, 2009 11:50:08 GMT -5
This story is just amazing! What a fantasy. I love the detail, the dialogue and the whole setting! Don't end this story... ever!
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Post by nell on Sept 19, 2009 12:20:39 GMT -5
Gosh, thanks, you guys! I definitely didn't expect this kind of response. I am going to buckle down and write a little more today.
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Post by nell on Sept 20, 2009 15:52:34 GMT -5
Despite a massive computer meltdown, I managed to get another bit of the story written. Hope you all like it.
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