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Post by canadiandev on Dec 4, 2009 9:36:02 GMT -5
Shmmmokin' is right! Please, some more.
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Dec 4, 2009 12:29:06 GMT -5
For reals?
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Dec 20, 2009 19:28:39 GMT -5
Taking it all down for a bit.
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Post by BA on Dec 20, 2009 20:07:08 GMT -5
Something that kinda bugs me is that, in fiction, the guys never have problems getting erections, even here (I'm thinking... I can't remember anything specific right off the top of my head...). When we know that that's not always the case. According to what I've read elsewhere, lots of SCI guys have trouble getting and maintaining an erection. Sometimes the ease of fictional erections seems almost like a betrayal. Please change the blue font to a different color and all will be right with the world. That is some beautiful writing Clover. Really nice and really real. Thanks.
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Dec 20, 2009 21:46:06 GMT -5
Thanks very much, BA. I had come back to delete. I really appreciate your feedback.
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Post by Ouch on Dec 21, 2009 7:37:08 GMT -5
Orange is much better!
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Post by Dee Dee on Dec 21, 2009 17:17:35 GMT -5
Clover, I like your short story and I really enjoyed reading it . I don´t think there´s any p0rn or overstepping ... and you can write in whichever colour, you prefer, when the content is this good . Thanks for writing and sharing .
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Post by Ouch on Dec 21, 2009 21:22:24 GMT -5
Oh yeah...bonus points for the usage of the word 'pr0n'... I see my lessons in l337 are being taken in by someone at least.
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Dec 21, 2009 22:45:35 GMT -5
I have to confess that I still don't know what l337 is really... if you spelled it in real letters would it be leet? 0r 1$ 17 jµ$7 4 £4n9µ493 4££ 17'$ 0wn?
(1 ƒ0µnÐ 4 7r4n$£470r!) w007!
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Post by Ouch on Dec 22, 2009 5:39:29 GMT -5
I have to confess that I still don't know what l337 is really... if you spelled it in real letters would it be leet? 0r 1$ 17 jµ$7 4 £4n9µ493 4££ 17'$ 0wn? (1 ƒ0µnÐ 4 7r4n$£470r!) w007! *Has a tear in his eye.* That was beautiful.
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Post by Triassic on Dec 22, 2009 6:58:38 GMT -5
i still can't figure out what l337 is sposed to say...
Leet?
bet?
wet?
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Post by Ouch on Dec 22, 2009 15:51:23 GMT -5
Leet, yes - short for 'elite'.
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Post by canadiandev on Dec 22, 2009 17:31:20 GMT -5
Clover, that story made my night. Thanks!
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Dec 22, 2009 21:04:45 GMT -5
Thanks, canadiandev and Aphrodite... I appreciate it.
Hey, Maely, do I get extra points for helping derail my own thread?
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Post by sidney on Dec 23, 2009 5:14:21 GMT -5
"liked" it would be the understatement of the year. I'm either going to sleep extremely well now, or not at all... thanks!
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