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Post by eustace on Jan 10, 2006 20:26:14 GMT -5
I love most of the stories posted on your website--especially those with gay themes. I think my favorite is "Skeletons," and I, like many others who post here, cannot wait for the next chapter. I think it is beautifully and sensitively written--with many, shall we say, "stimulating" details. I have just one sort of technical problem (or question)--from Chapter 14: I know that motorized wheelchairs are extremely heavy (most well over 100 pounds, I think). How could Skelly's father have possibly stored his chair in the back of the family car for the visit to their Russian friends? Unless, of course, they had a handicapped-equipped van with a hydraulic lift. But, if that were the case, then Skelly in his chair could have been lifted into the van with the hydraulic mechanism. Perhaps it would more plausible for Skelly to also have a manual chair for such outings. Also, I would find his need to have his wheel chair pushed by someone else rather exciting. Whoever the author of "Skeletons" is, please continue the story! Indeed, I think it might just have the makings for a publishable work--with further development of an interesting plot and the introduction of a real "relationship" for Skelly. (Of course, I think we see that coming already.) I certainly find it more interesting than "The Dive from Clausen's Pier."
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Post by Pisti on Jan 11, 2006 12:57:07 GMT -5
I just had the chance to read the most recent chapter. I still like it very much!
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Post by dana on Jan 11, 2006 17:56:00 GMT -5
Please post a new part soon... It is a great story! Thanks to you for it! Sorry I've procrastinated still in sending some more to Lee. But in one of his posts, Stude actually said something that really rang true. It was along the lines of "are you embarrassed to have your fantasies read by actual crips?" The truth is, yes. It is embarrassing. Before the site was almost entirely devotees. When posting something, one would always feel comfortable with what they had written or expressed because they knew it would be read by fellow devs who can relate or appreciate whatever the story hits on. Now that there are actual disabled guys reading the story...well, it just gets awkward and creates a little tension, or at least that's how I feel. That's why I've been reluctant to have any more of Skeletons posted. Before I would read over the story and think "ooo, they'll like that", but now I look back over what used to be considered the good stuff and it's just awkward. I end up deleting it, therefor making it a bland, uninteresting (on the dev's part) story.
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Post by Pisti on Jan 26, 2006 21:20:22 GMT -5
Thanks for the update (chapter15)! I like it!
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Post by Julie on Jan 27, 2006 4:44:17 GMT -5
We had to wait a long time for this chapter - but it was certainly worth the wait. Thanks very much - I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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Post by wheelie37 on Jan 27, 2006 6:58:04 GMT -5
loved the new chapter very realistic, it is so easy too get caught having sex when being disabled!
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