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Post by Max on Jul 6, 2012 12:11:14 GMT -5
Hi Ryoot I'm glad you liked it  . I've got the next chapter close almost done, and before I publish it, it will be proofread. Thanks for pointing out the error, I'll fix it when I publish it on the blog. Stay tuned for more of SImon's story Hi Max, I also like your story and encourage you to post it on the blog. Writing a bit ahead of what you post is also a good idea. I usually try to have at least one more chapter already complete than I post. That way I can go back and re-read and edit for a while before it's due for posting. It's how I usually pick up on typos or my favorite--missing prepositions. Like you I'm also a non-native English speaker, so we ;-) have to be extra careful. I did pick up one grammatical error early in your story. It should be 'the mall that lay' instead of 'the mall that lied' (in fact I don't believe the mall is capable of lying or telling the truth ;-) |
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Post by Max on Jul 7, 2012 9:01:07 GMT -5
Allright, I couldn't ignore the chants and demands from you all, so the first part of Simon's Search has just been posted on the blog. Enjoy, and stay tuned . |
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Post by Ximena on Jul 7, 2012 9:14:13 GMT -5
Awesome! WTG, Max! Looking forward to the next part.  |
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Post by Max on Jul 7, 2012 15:50:06 GMT -5
Thank everyone for the replies on the blog If anyone has questions about the story or other input feel free to drop me a pm or post it here. Maybe I'll even consider requests  |
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Post by Max on Jul 11, 2012 9:16:37 GMT -5
Just a heads-up: Simon's Search has reached stage 2 Have fun! |
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Post by Max on Jul 20, 2012 16:28:00 GMT -5
A bit later than I intended, but part 3 of Simon's Search has been published on the blog. Perhaps needles to warn you all, but this part contain slightly more adult language. |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 20, 2012 16:54:19 GMT -5
Really good. Was a nice surprise that you'd posted another part. Your writing seems a lot more confident. Looking forward to more.
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Post by RyooT on Jul 21, 2012 13:33:39 GMT -5
I really like how you continue the story. Interesting to have someone explore if he is "a little bit gay". I have several gay friends, but they are very open and more on the "I'm nothing but gay" end of the spectrum, so it's so nice to hear a new perspective.
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Post by Max on Jul 21, 2012 14:27:19 GMT -5
I think the process of discovering (if) you're gay is something a lot of guys go through. For some i's quick, they know they're definately gay. Some take a lot longer to find out. Especally when you come across these feelings later in life it takes some getting used to. And some time to accept and discover those feelings. Simon is one of the latter. Used to straight feelings and suddenly realising he's got other feelings too. Apparently that makes for an interesting story . It's great to read so many positive reactions and that the storyline so far is interesting to you all . |
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Jul 21, 2012 14:35:44 GMT -5
Yeah, the lesbian I know best pretty much knew from childhood. So this is interesting.
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Post by Max on Jul 21, 2012 14:43:33 GMT -5
Come to think of it, I get it that storywise I'm on the right track, but what about the adult part in part 3? Was it good enough? Any recommendations or requests to make any future scenes better?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 22, 2012 16:20:13 GMT -5
Max story well written and issues dealt with well |
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Post by Max on Jul 30, 2012 10:31:27 GMT -5
I'm very sorry but there won't be a new part of Simon's story anytime soon. I'm having a few personal things to deal with before I can try to get back in the flow to write.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2012 10:36:04 GMT -5
Hope everything works out OK for you Max
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Jul 30, 2012 21:18:17 GMT -5
Oh, my. I hope things improve quickly for you.
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Hi Max, 
. I've got the next chapter close almost done, and before I publish it, it will be proofread.
