Post by Deleted on Jan 27, 2014 17:56:18 GMT -5
Hey everyone, as some of you may know I also write a little bit on the side, well sometimes less, sometimes more and I have kind of four projects ongoing, constantly thinking, writing, rewriting, editing...sometimes life is just too busy, then my writing stays on the backburner and sooner than later I get withdrawl symptoms 
. English is not my first language but it is the language I write in and I hope it is not too bad....My writing is still very personal to me and I am constantly thinking about what the heck I am even doing....but I do enjoy it and it also helps me deal at the same time with my feelings as a devotee. To put this tiny excerpt here on PD is a really big deal for me, I am just not as courageous as some of you but I wanted to give this a shot. This is just a small excerpt of a conversation between my two main characters of one of my projects. I wanted to give you a little glimpse firstly into my writing and secondly make you curious about my characters and what is going on with them. If you want to give me feedback or have any questions I would be happy so here goes (my hands are shaking as I am typing this) 
Thanks everyone for taking the time to read this!
""He looked up again and swallowed feeling her grip on his throat as she continued, “This is the deal. I find you very hot and we could have some good fun together if you are up for it. I am single, I don’t want a boyfriend, and I just want to have some fun. I work as an escort so I am constantly around men who treat me like a queen, I don’t think any guy could deal with having a relationship with me other than sex, so I am putting it to you. I would like to hook up with you sometimes and we could have some fun, no strings attached. You don’t have to feel weird, I think you are really hot and I can totally see us doing it so think about that, Jason. I have money, I support myself, and you don’t have to worry about that because I imagine you are not exactly able to do a whole lot financially. You are very attractive to me, I have a thing for guys in wheelchairs and I really loved your leg braces. My panties got wet just seeing you in those. I want to see you in those all the time. I am going to leave here in a moment. I wanted to see you again today to make sure I was really into you and that you and I would click. I totally think we click. I will give you some time to think about this. You can call me or text me when you have made a decision.” Ariana felt Jason swallow again and let go of him. He just looked at her astonished, speechless and didn’t know what to think of this. He also felt a slight anger creep up inside himself. How could she put him on the spot like this? Ariana stayed close to his face. Jason looked up at her. She had literally wiped the smile off his face. He said lowly, “So, you are saying you just want to use me?” Ariana smiled, “Don’t put it like that Jason, that sounds bad. I want to hang out with you, yes. I want to spend time with you, yes. I would like to see you and me together, yes. I just don’t want a relationship.” Jason shook his head slightly looking down, “Wow!” He said it not in amazement but in disbelief. Ariana said, “I do sleep with other men on my job, Jason. I want to be totally clear on that. I may be blunt but I do respect you and also respect you if you cannot agree to this. Do you have any thoughts on my proposition?” Jason felt the anger get stronger, his words came out harsh “Ariana, what do you expect me to think about this….you are into guys in wheelchairs, what the fuck are you talking about…my braces…I hate those things…what is your deal? I mean, what do you expect me to say about this? You know…I was pretty surprised when you told me your number at the bus stop but at the same time I was freaking happy about it; because “No” I haven’t really been collecting hot chicks phone numbers over the last two years or so. When you gave me your number I was surprised but I also felt like I had a shot at meeting someone again, like you would be into me and stuff, it was an ego boost I haven’t really experienced lately. Then when you texted back and agreed to meet me today…do you even know how nervous I was to come here but how happy at the same time. Come to find out we are both from Northern Cali...what are the odds…and now you just shattered me to pieces right here. I can’t believe you told me this stuff….” He felt his hands shaky and his voice tremble as he tried to think of his next words, “What the fuck am I supposed to think? You want to use me for a quick fuck every so often, when you feel like it I suppose? I am out of here…” He threw a 20 $ bill on the table and put his gloves on with shaky hands. He was breathing quickly and he felt tense and his body react a little bit. He was hoping he wouldn’t get any spasms right now. ""
. English is not my first language but it is the language I write in and I hope it is not too bad....My writing is still very personal to me and I am constantly thinking about what the heck I am even doing....but I do enjoy it and it also helps me deal at the same time with my feelings as a devotee. To put this tiny excerpt here on PD is a really big deal for me, I am just not as courageous as some of you but I wanted to give this a shot. This is just a small excerpt of a conversation between my two main characters of one of my projects. I wanted to give you a little glimpse firstly into my writing and secondly make you curious about my characters and what is going on with them. If you want to give me feedback or have any questions I would be happy so here goes (my hands are shaking as I am typing this) 
Thanks everyone for taking the time to read this!""He looked up again and swallowed feeling her grip on his throat as she continued, “This is the deal. I find you very hot and we could have some good fun together if you are up for it. I am single, I don’t want a boyfriend, and I just want to have some fun. I work as an escort so I am constantly around men who treat me like a queen, I don’t think any guy could deal with having a relationship with me other than sex, so I am putting it to you. I would like to hook up with you sometimes and we could have some fun, no strings attached. You don’t have to feel weird, I think you are really hot and I can totally see us doing it so think about that, Jason. I have money, I support myself, and you don’t have to worry about that because I imagine you are not exactly able to do a whole lot financially. You are very attractive to me, I have a thing for guys in wheelchairs and I really loved your leg braces. My panties got wet just seeing you in those. I want to see you in those all the time. I am going to leave here in a moment. I wanted to see you again today to make sure I was really into you and that you and I would click. I totally think we click. I will give you some time to think about this. You can call me or text me when you have made a decision.” Ariana felt Jason swallow again and let go of him. He just looked at her astonished, speechless and didn’t know what to think of this. He also felt a slight anger creep up inside himself. How could she put him on the spot like this? Ariana stayed close to his face. Jason looked up at her. She had literally wiped the smile off his face. He said lowly, “So, you are saying you just want to use me?” Ariana smiled, “Don’t put it like that Jason, that sounds bad. I want to hang out with you, yes. I want to spend time with you, yes. I would like to see you and me together, yes. I just don’t want a relationship.” Jason shook his head slightly looking down, “Wow!” He said it not in amazement but in disbelief. Ariana said, “I do sleep with other men on my job, Jason. I want to be totally clear on that. I may be blunt but I do respect you and also respect you if you cannot agree to this. Do you have any thoughts on my proposition?” Jason felt the anger get stronger, his words came out harsh “Ariana, what do you expect me to think about this….you are into guys in wheelchairs, what the fuck are you talking about…my braces…I hate those things…what is your deal? I mean, what do you expect me to say about this? You know…I was pretty surprised when you told me your number at the bus stop but at the same time I was freaking happy about it; because “No” I haven’t really been collecting hot chicks phone numbers over the last two years or so. When you gave me your number I was surprised but I also felt like I had a shot at meeting someone again, like you would be into me and stuff, it was an ego boost I haven’t really experienced lately. Then when you texted back and agreed to meet me today…do you even know how nervous I was to come here but how happy at the same time. Come to find out we are both from Northern Cali...what are the odds…and now you just shattered me to pieces right here. I can’t believe you told me this stuff….” He felt his hands shaky and his voice tremble as he tried to think of his next words, “What the fuck am I supposed to think? You want to use me for a quick fuck every so often, when you feel like it I suppose? I am out of here…” He threw a 20 $ bill on the table and put his gloves on with shaky hands. He was breathing quickly and he felt tense and his body react a little bit. He was hoping he wouldn’t get any spasms right now. ""
....please keep going!
