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Post by hartmannwrites on Mar 23, 2016 22:29:13 GMT -5
Ow. My brain. Writing this hurt my brain. A lot.
So I hope y'all enjoy...
Thanks to everyone who reads and comments and all that jazz!
Love you guys, Ann
OMG, @shanzi ! I think at least one Princess Bride reference is going into every single thing I write from now on  |
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Post by Bkizz on Mar 24, 2016 6:42:41 GMT -5
OMG, @shanzi ! I think at least one Princess Bride reference is going into every single thing I write from now on Inconceivable!  |
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Post by robbb on Mar 24, 2016 11:26:10 GMT -5
Loving it Anne, but worried that they might never get past tearing each other apart.
I still think the gay guy next door should have been called Rob!
R.x
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Post by blueskye101 on Mar 24, 2016 14:42:49 GMT -5
Loved it so much. Nice and emotional. Angsty. Terrific fun writing style. Please don't leave it there. We need our HEA
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Post by lu5 on Mar 27, 2016 2:12:54 GMT -5
hartmannwrites Okay Ann, now you need to include a scene where Cale shouts out "As youuuu wiiiish" to Mickey. *tosses fun size bag of skittles to Ann* You're the writer, so I leave it to you, but maybe you can throw in a date at the movies where Mickey requests Cale gets popcorn and he rolls down the aisle towards the concession stand shouting "As youuuu wiiiish" towards her.Contrived, perhaps, but not INCONCEIVABLE! (See what I did there, yeah? Just brought that riiiiight back around... Okay, I'll just show myself the door and wait patiently for the next chapter.
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Post by hartmannwrites on Mar 27, 2016 13:15:29 GMT -5
Ooooh!
I have to share this new author and NEW STORY with you guys (and girls)!
This little short is sooooo devvy! Some of the descriptions were... *sigh*
Please let D.J. know your thoughts with a comment on the site.
She is a fellow dev with a longer, ongoing story to come...very soon...so feedback will encourage her to write...just saying 
Thanks to everyone for reading!!!
Mr robbb , I'm so delighted that you loved the last chapter. As for the whole tearing each other apart thing...ooh! Squirrel!! 
Thank you soooo much, blueskye101 ! I'm glad you don't mind my penchant for angst. As for the HEA...ooh! The squirrel again!
Awww, lu5 ! You always make me smile! Actually, there is a movie theatre scene that never made the "cut" a.k.a. I abandoned it midway through LOL |
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Post by lu5 on Mar 27, 2016 14:02:57 GMT -5
Okay hartmannwrites maybe we need to invest in some curtains for your writing lair, because I love squirrels as much as the next gal, but they seem to be interfering with what is already a tenuous shot of a HEA here. You definitely need to write the full novel, because I'd totally buy it!! |
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Post by hartmannwrites on Mar 30, 2016 22:29:50 GMT -5
Oopsy daisy! I totally forgot to post the link to Chapter 20. My bad.
I know it's a short one, but it I think it worked better that way. Lemme know what y'all think. Thank you oodles!
Much love,
HartmANN
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Post by lu5 on Mar 30, 2016 22:58:59 GMT -5
hartmannwrites, you've got my imagination going now... Hartmannwrites : *points at window* SQUIRREL!! Squirrel: *chatters, drops armsful of acorns* *freezes* Hartmannwrites and squirrel are stuck, entranced by one another, fall turns to winter,winter to spring.The squirrel suddenly realizes it is starving and Ann realizes her book is languishing. Both immediately shake their heads as the trance is broken and scamper off to complete their tasks.
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Post by hartmannwrites on Mar 30, 2016 23:14:41 GMT -5
*gives lu5 a big hug* Because you're just that awesome |
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Post by robbb on Mar 31, 2016 11:15:43 GMT -5
Okay, that short chapter explains a lot about Mickey's personality. Loved it.
Onwards and upwards for her and Cale I hope.
R.x
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Post by harmonniousvision on Apr 1, 2016 9:29:23 GMT -5
Ch 19-20 were my favorites so far... <3 joining the masses begging for more!!! |
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Post by hartmannwrites on Apr 1, 2016 14:47:48 GMT -5
Woo hoo!!! braced4impact is finally back with the NEXT CHAPTER of Darker Devotion!
Hope you guys enjoy this update as much as I did
Happy Friday and lots of love,
HartmANN
Ooh! And if it's not too much trouble, I was wondering if I could ask y'all to comment under the actually story/chapter? It's not a huge deal, but I would like to be able to reply sooner to thank you for your feedback without posting a false alarm update on this thread LOL
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Post by hartmannwrites on Apr 8, 2016 14:42:33 GMT -5
So...I accidentally wrote an extra chapter for QoH...totally didn't plan to...but couldn't resist...the force...too strong...
Here's CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE for y'all. Hope you enjoy! I've (Wow. English fail.) I'd love to get your thoughts! Unless they're secret, then...well, yeah... Happiest of happy fridays, HartmANN |
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Post by hartmannwrites on Apr 9, 2016 15:36:39 GMT -5
Sooo...
DJ is back with a new story called A Thousand Sweet Kisses. Woot woot! Thank you for sharing this!!
Here's Chapter One for you guys! And the only thing that I have to say is...
Quad lovers rejoice!!!
Yours,
HartmANN
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