alice
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Post by alice on Oct 3, 2005 17:53:14 GMT -5
Very nice Paul! But what's up with all the exclamation points?
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Post by rollerboylover on Oct 4, 2005 18:58:35 GMT -5
Ohhh I like. Thanks to all who are contributing. This is very enjoyable. Can't wait to see where it will go.
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Post by wheelie37 on Oct 5, 2005 3:20:49 GMT -5
thank you AB I loved the follow on by lucrtia too  So looking forward to the next bit  |
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Post by wheelie37 on Oct 10, 2005 2:46:44 GMT -5
decided to add a bit myself |
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Post by wheelie37 on Oct 10, 2005 2:47:20 GMT -5
Doug goes to the exit and taking a little run at it, pushes it open with his footplates.
He gets out of the way, holding the door open for the two girls.
Kam runs out giggling, followed by Anna who giving him a warm smile says “why thank you kind sir”. “You’re very welcome; I know a nice place just around the corner”.
Kam cheekily asks Doug for a ride and he can’t really refuse her. “Ok just sit still or you will have to get off ok?” “Ok” replies Kam, a huge smile on her face.
They quickly go around the corner, Anna marvelling at how Doug pushes his wheelchair along, sometimes just with one arm as steadying Kam on his lap.
They enter this lovely garden area, surrounded by shrubs and a play area for Kam.
Kam rushes over to a huge outside chess set, the pieces coming up to about her waist.
Doug and Anna move to a table right nearby and wait for someone to come and serve them whilst watching Kam set the pieces up.
Anna listens as Doug tries to tell Anna how to move her pieces and to where to move his afterwards. “Ok Kam, the pawns, yes the small ones in the front, can move one or two spaces at first, they can only move one space at a time after that and can only move forward and take diagonally”.
Kam moves one of her pieces forward then Doug tells Kam to move his knight, yes the horse, which is the only piece that can jump over others. He tells her that it can move two steps forward and one to the right or left, or one step forward and two to the right or left. At this point in time it has to be the first choice.
Kay has a bit of trouble lifting the piece so Doug quickly wheels over and lifts the piece over, then holding on to his wheel, leans over to pick up some pawns that Kay has knocked over.
Doug has just finished sorting the pieces out when a waiter arrives for their order.
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Post by wheelie37 on Oct 10, 2005 8:34:16 GMT -5
sorry about the last "kay" instead of "kam"  got too in too the story |
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Post by Leilia on Oct 10, 2005 14:01:17 GMT -5
kam yells her order of a bacon sandwhich with a cola, as Doug wheels back to the table Anna cant but help notice every muscle in his upper body that is visibly so well defined even underneath his t-shirt she admires his lovely suntan too...wonders if he tans naked in his backyard like she does......in his chair?.... Anna's snaps out of her raunchy day dream as Doug interupts her and asks what she'd like, eventhough she just oders a diet coke she knows in the back of her mind what she really wants is to be with him.The food arrives and Kam and Doug tuck into their meals.Doug explains that he is an architecture student at the local university, and Anna explains that she is a nursing student in her final year.Doug has quick thoughts of her in a skimpy nurses outfit.....this time his day dream is interupted by the sound of Annas moblie phone going off.Anna answers hesitantly and as she does he wonders if it could be her boyfriend?
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Post by wheelie37 on Oct 12, 2005 12:00:06 GMT -5
nice addition |
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Post by wheelie37 on Oct 15, 2005 15:59:47 GMT -5
please carry it on leilia |
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Post by rollerboylover on Oct 15, 2005 20:09:24 GMT -5
You didn't ruin it in Leilia. I think our writers have all left for holidays or somethint. Everythig has been very quiet around here in my opinion. So instead of hoping for someone else to add at this time, maybe you should consider adding another part. Please?
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Post by BA on Oct 15, 2005 20:49:47 GMT -5
Nope, Leilia, it is just fine...sometimes we have to sit and stew with the stories for days at a time to get further inspiration. I, for one, have just not been in the "writing mood" the past few days. Must be the cycle of the moon. Keep writing. I love the added tension of a "boyfriend" coming into the picture.
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Post by Leilia on Oct 16, 2005 4:49:12 GMT -5
Anna saw Liam's number come up, and feelings of pain and rejection and anger flowed through her.Liam was a surgeon at Bay Hospital where Anna was a nurse, they had been seeing each other for a few months till one day a lady came looking for him during a night shift, Anna explained to the lady that Liam was busy with a patient and that if she left her name Anna would pass on the message,she explained that she was his wife and to tell him she was back in town early he needn't pick her up from the airport in the morning.Anna was devastated, she had felt used..she really hoped Liam was different to other men
.Anna quickly put her phone back in her bag and was suddenly refreshed to think that for the first time in ages she was so turned on by someone since Liam.They paid the bill and made their way back to get the laundry. Doug was a little quiet since she got the phone call, he felt maybe she didn't want to answer because he was there, never the less he felt an enormous attraction to her.
Anna noticed that Kam had become a little restless and suggested to Doug that she would drop his laundry off at his place later if he wanted to take Kam home,Doug first declined but the sound of Kam wining that she was bored drove him to eventually accept Anna's offer he gave her his address and telephone number.Anna watched as they drove off she was absolutely wet at the sight of him transferring into his car.
Once again her thoughts were rudely interrupted by her phone going off this time she answered with the intent on telling Liam off once and for all...how dare he call her after what he did to her? Liam was a loud controlling Scorpio and spoke sternly as he told her there had been a major bus accident and they were overloaded with patients and that she should come to the hospital now.Liam was to the point and then put the phone down.Anna knew that she had an obligation to go into work, besides she could have done with a little overtime cash.
Doug had not anticipated Anna to have arrived at his place so soon, so he'd taken off his shirt and was sitting outside in the sun with a beer enjoying the afternoon sun while Kam swam in their back yard pool,his thoughts were fixed on Anna and they way she looked at him, he imagined her breasts beneath the hard nipples he noticed under her shirt.....just then the door bell rang and he was pleasantly surprised to see Anna who was just as pleasantly surprised to see his exposed bronzed upper body all six of his rectus abdominus muscles were so perfectly carved out.Despite the obvious distraction she explained the situation and apologized for returning his dirty instead of clean clothes.
Anna didn't want this to be the last time they met she was desperate to meet him again, just as she was about to ask him if they could meet later Doug got to it first asked her if they could meet up for a drink or something.Anna accepted as she blushed all the way to her car.
At the hospital it was chaotic for a few hours but they managed to clear all the patients from the bus accident and by the evening most of the extra staff had gone home. Now that the rush had come and gone Anna fell back into a chair in the nurses station and lit a cigarette she checked and wondered if it was too late to ask Doug to come for a coke at the hospital cafeteria after all she had a bit of a break now and there was just one other nurse on the ward and it was quiet.
Anna typed a text message to Doug she didn't want to call in case he was in bed.Doug had gotten Kam into bed and called a baby sitter to come for an hour or two.He was sure that Anna was hungry and had picked up an Indian takeaway for the both of them.Once he arrived at the hospital Anna met him outside in the parking lot she knew that if she was needed upstairs they would beep her.It was a beautiful evening the stars were amazing,it was just to lovely out to eat inside the cafeteria dining hall, so Anna pulled up on Doug's car bonnet and he sat beside her in his chair .It felt as if they had known each other for ages they laughed and got along very well.
Doug was pressed for time Kams babysitter could only stay for two hours.Anna thanked him profusely for the meal and good time,as she was getting of his car bonnet she slipped down and fell on top of Doug's lap(who had a good view of her sexy panties), in fact the moment was not as awkward as it sounds it was just perfect.Doug slipped his hands under her legs and held her, their lips met and they kissed.As they kissed gently their pulses went up and their breathing got heavier the kiss became more passionate..more erotic....
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Post by wheelie37 on Oct 16, 2005 10:56:36 GMT -5
wow! fantastic story!! cant wait for the next bit!! |
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So looking forward to the next bit 
got too in too the story 