amy
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Post by amy on Mar 1, 2009 13:06:49 GMT -5
Thanks to Lee for posting a new story (The Library Nazi) that I wrote after scouring the old stories for motivation. I haven't had a chance to write anything in forever and ever, so I am super rusty right now--apologies in advance! This is just the first 10 pages, but if people enjoy it, I'll try to keep writing.
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Post by Quad787 on Mar 1, 2009 15:28:30 GMT -5
Welcome back. I really enjoyed your last effort and hoped you'd resurface with some new material someday. I can see the similarities in description and style. I look forward to future installments.
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Post by Triassic on Mar 1, 2009 20:30:18 GMT -5
i wrote a piece the other day. i just started writing it right on the 'soliciting' thread instead of sending it to lee as i should have. it kind of got away from me; i didn't think it would be as long as it is, that's basically why i didn't send it in. but still, it is really just a little vignette. i based it somwhat on my own experiences.
but i'd be curious to know what those who dig stories think of it...and also whether or not i got the female dev perspective at least semi-right. and please feel free to say what's wrong w/it. i'm not a fiction writer per se, but critique is how one improves...
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Post by amy on Mar 1, 2009 23:35:49 GMT -5
I liked it a lot, Triassic! Maybe a legbraces fan will be able to give you better feedback though, since I'm more of a chair fan. I'd like feedback too. Not so much of a critique, but something more along the lines of: a) Yay, keep writing! or b) Don't waste your time... Preferably a, of course. But if I don't hear anything, I'll probably assume b. I'm a busy girl, so I like to know my efforts are appreciated.
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Post by Enid on Mar 2, 2009 8:30:42 GMT -5
No, Amy, definitely keep writing! ;D Triassic, I liked the story. I think you might have potential to write something a bit longer
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Mar 2, 2009 8:39:53 GMT -5
a) to both of you.
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Post by jiakechong on Mar 2, 2009 9:14:51 GMT -5
Amy! Like your story very much£¡ My friend and I had translated your Surgeon (chapter 1-18) into Chinese under your permission. Is it ok that I continue translate your new story? Nice work! please go on........
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Post by amy on Mar 2, 2009 10:12:10 GMT -5
Is it ok that I continue translate your new story? Nice work! please go on........ Um, sure... translate away
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