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Post by annabelle on Jun 28, 2011 13:00:11 GMT -5
I've been a little unmotivated to write lately... I think maybe I'm a little burnt out or something. Anyway, I decided to post a dev short story I wrote way back in college called Elevators. It's a little corny, but... oh well.
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Post by dentelle on Jun 28, 2011 13:12:07 GMT -5
Corny can be good
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Post by ruthmadison on Jun 28, 2011 13:42:27 GMT -5
Nothing wrong with taking some time to refresh yourself! I'm sure something will spark your writing again. And I agree with dentelle, corny can be good! It's nice sometimes to just lose yourself in something that's just fantasy fluff.
I'm enjoying the story so far, the main character is very vivid.
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Post by dentelle on Jun 29, 2011 21:27:05 GMT -5
great story
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Jun 29, 2011 22:20:55 GMT -5
I loved it.
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Post by Valkyrja on Jul 2, 2011 14:18:34 GMT -5
I "copy-paste" what I wrote in the other site... Annabelle... I wanted to read it for a couple of day... but, I had no time!! LOL... I´ve just read it and... wow... LOL... I love it! She is so damaged!.. and he is so patient!!... My god... how can you create male caracther so lovely!?... Thank you a lot for this story, it´s wonderful!
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Post by Circuit on Jul 2, 2011 23:36:02 GMT -5
I kept picturing Emma Pillsbury from Glee as Helen while reading this. I think she's my favorite of your protagonists so far. Great job!
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Post by annabelle on Jul 3, 2011 8:22:12 GMT -5
Thanks Although I think Emma is more lovable than Helen...
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