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Post by happyface2013 on Dec 21, 2022 6:27:26 GMT -5
Hi fellow wheelers and devs. First of all, I want to wish everyone a Happy Christmas and New Year. Below is a link to my latest short story. It's a fictional romance between a Ukrainian refugee and a disabled man. Feedback always welcome. Hope you enjoy - markswritingcorner.poetry.blog/love-and-war/ |
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Post by britishtetra on Dec 21, 2022 7:37:41 GMT -5
There was a story in the newspapers over here in England. A Ukrainian woman went to live with a couple, and the man fell in love with the Ukrainian. Consequently the marriage broke down, and Ukrainian lady went back home. Three weeks later the man went to the Ukraine? Happy days. I will read your story and tell you what I think.
Pete
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Post by blueskye101 on Dec 22, 2022 0:52:00 GMT -5
Hi fellow wheelers and devs. First of all, I want to wish everyone a Happy Christmas and New Year. Below is a link to my latest short story. It's a fictional romance between a Ukrainian refugee and a disabled man. Feedback always welcome. Hope you enjoy - markswritingcorner.poetry.blog/love-and-war/Really liked this very up to the minute story. Nice lead up on the sexy scene but way too quick and slam bang on the actual deal. 😉 |
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Post by britishtetra on Dec 22, 2022 5:19:40 GMT -5
Yes, it was a good story, I thought you needed a longer sex scene at the end… like Blueskye wrote. I am curious, have you got any Ukrainian refugees in Ireland?
Pete 👍
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Post by happyface2013 on Dec 22, 2022 6:11:20 GMT -5
Thanks guys, great to have feedback. Will have a think about the end scene.
Yes, about 50 to 60k Ukranians have come to Ireland since the war. I'm sure more have gone to the UK but we're a country of only 5 million it's significant.
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