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Post by amy on Mar 15, 2009 9:48:21 GMT -5
Thank you to everyone who commented on my story so far, it totally motivated me to continue writing. Lee has now posted part 4 and I'm hard at work on part 5.
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Post by Enid on Mar 15, 2009 10:29:56 GMT -5
I saw it earlier, and thought about sending a message but feedback isn't my forte ("Yay! I love it" might work on a message board, but it's ridiculous as an email). Anyway, I wanted to let you know I'm reading it and enjoying it *waits patiently for the next chapter*
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Post by amy on Mar 15, 2009 11:26:01 GMT -5
Thanks, Enid. It sort of pains me when I read over my other story and see how much more polished my writing used to be, but I'm trying my best. Just need to get back in practice, I guess. Three years of 30-hour shifts takes a lot out of you...
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Post by Ouch on Mar 15, 2009 20:37:58 GMT -5
I'd like to offer more constructive feedback as well, but it's a little disorientating offering feedback on segments of a whole - I much prefer to read something in its entirety - perhaps that's motivation to continue writing! Your story, and writing altogether is good, though, and it's nice enough to have someone putting the effort into producing material.
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Post by amy on Mar 15, 2009 20:57:58 GMT -5
I'd like to offer more constructive feedback as well, but it's a little disorientating offering feedback on segments of a whole - I much prefer to read something in its entirety - perhaps that's motivation to continue writing! Your story, and writing altogether is good, though, and it's nice enough to have someone putting the effort into producing material. I have been wanting to write something again for so long, but I didn't want to be the one to break the ice. When I saw the stories section was active again, I decided to take that opportunity to get back on the horse, so to speak. It's not that I wouldn't want feedback after, but the thing is, whatever I'm going to do with the story, I'm already doing it. I'm not going to go back and edit it and try to get it published or something. After it gets posted here, that's pretty much the end of the line. It's FOR you guys. And me, of course.
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Post by amy on Mar 17, 2009 21:59:09 GMT -5
P.S. I'm going to send Lee another part tonight and it'll hopefully get posted tomorrow.
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Post by Lee on Mar 18, 2009 23:07:31 GMT -5
OK, update posted.
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Post by Lee on Mar 22, 2009 10:54:07 GMT -5
Wow, thanks to Amy for yet another update, which I just posted. Maybe this will act as motivation to others for submissions.
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Post by dolly on Mar 25, 2009 22:25:05 GMT -5
thanks for the great new story, amy.
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Post by amy on Mar 25, 2009 23:40:08 GMT -5
Thank you. I was hoping to have another part done for this weekend, but unfortunately, I'm totally WRITERS BLOCKED. Gah. Maybe some sudden inspiration will hit me.
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Post by E on Mar 26, 2009 7:36:08 GMT -5
Thank you. I was hoping to have another part done for this weekend, but unfortunately, I'm totally WRITERS BLOCKED. Gah. Maybe some sudden inspiration will hit me. ... or run over your foot.
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Post by Lee on Mar 29, 2009 15:34:34 GMT -5
Thank you. I was hoping to have another part done for this weekend, but unfortunately, I'm totally WRITERS BLOCKED. Gah. Maybe some sudden inspiration will hit me. Well, I guess Amy found her inspiration. I just posted the new chapter she sent me.
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Post by amy on Mar 29, 2009 20:13:21 GMT -5
That was quick turnover, thanks!
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Post by abc on Apr 6, 2009 6:48:33 GMT -5
Enjoying the story Amy, I'm not very good at constructive feedback so I thought I'd just post something here
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Post by amy on Apr 12, 2009 10:47:57 GMT -5
Monster update...
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