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Post by Inigo Montoya on Mar 27, 2010 11:16:45 GMT -5
Yes, Madames! I salute you! Hahahaha hehehe hohohohohooo!! ;D Here's a wee snippet to keep you angry wolves at bay! Also I'm trying to keep you on your toes...to keep from guessing the ending...Sigh! You make it sooo hard... It's... Tricky, tricky....tricky,tricky, tricky! (Okay, noone probably got that but me...  ) |
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Post by Ray T on Mar 27, 2010 11:51:02 GMT -5
OMg Nanner... that is a good story. what a way to start off my story reading (yes this is the first story that I have read) I usually skip the story section. Is this total fiction or do you draw from your life with changes and embelishments?
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Mar 27, 2010 17:54:38 GMT -5
!!!Haha! No, seriously Clover. You got it. Me and you are just linked at the brain sometimes!  Ray, I would have to say it's TOTAL fiction. But yeah, I definately throw in my personality (i.e, a lot of her slang is mine.) and the guy is usually a combo of guys personalities I like (i.e, being a smart-ass. That kind of back and forth chemistry/flirting) mixed with a few moments I've had in real life (i.e, grabbing of my waist when trying to leave bed, pillow fight...to name a couple) of course they didn't happen EXACTLY as I wrote it! It's a writer's job to embellish the things she wants to embellish, and focus on certain things she/he thinks is important to tell. So yeah, lastly I wanted to say, I've NEVER been with a para!! So if I get sh*t wrong....profuse apologies, and bowing of head in shame in advance. I'll admit that I didn't remember exactly.... but I thought there was an old rap song.... google did the rest.  It was a fun reminder. |
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Mar 28, 2010 0:37:09 GMT -5
Heres a tiny bit more! Im really trying to finish this facken story! It's getting way too long!! Oh no it's not! |
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Post by ρɦoeɳix on Mar 28, 2010 2:54:26 GMT -5
Uh... was this tiny bit more so tiny that it went invisible? |
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Post by canadiandev on Mar 28, 2010 8:06:37 GMT -5
Really liking this story. Don't get back together with Drew! Nooooooo! ;-)
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Mar 28, 2010 8:39:43 GMT -5
No, no one wants her to get back together with Drew.... but... mmm..... Chocolate. ;D
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Post by ρɦoeɳix on Mar 28, 2010 10:59:34 GMT -5
Oooooh, now I found it! Silly me! ;D And no, no one wants her to get back together with Drew!!  ;D |
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Post by Ray T on Mar 28, 2010 12:05:07 GMT -5
But isn't that what most of the time happens when a hot chick starts thinking with her head? she goes for mr safe and normal not mr chair?... hummmm and what is it with women getting treated like crap and then going back to the guy that treated her like that when she has a guy that treats here like a queen, that begs her to let them take care of them ect... what is with that can some woman please explain that to me. is it like you like the challenge of trying to change the guy that is bad? and take for granted that the guy that adores you? lol now i am ranting lol
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Post by Ouch on Mar 28, 2010 12:11:35 GMT -5
At times, I wonder the same thing, ray; I don't think it's an omnipresent occurrence, though.
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Post by Ray T on Mar 28, 2010 12:13:57 GMT -5
I am not sure of it being omnipresent, however I have seen it time and time again with many diffrent women and have to wonder if it is just a thing that is in their blood or something?
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Post by alexaheart on Mar 28, 2010 14:08:10 GMT -5
Ok, I am LUVING this story hun!!!
Please keep going. You have a great way of writing that seems so real. I keep getting sucked in everytime you add another part.
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Post by Inigo Montoya on Mar 29, 2010 7:14:23 GMT -5
I'm enjoying the story... but this part earns a .... Good job, Nanner.  I'm totally engaged with this. |
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Post by Ray T on Mar 29, 2010 9:53:01 GMT -5
Me too nanners so don't you dare stop writing . EVER.
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Post by ρɦoeɳix on Mar 29, 2010 23:02:44 GMT -5
Yay! More, more! ;D
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It was a fun reminder. 
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I'm totally engaged with this.