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Post by canadiandev on Apr 14, 2010 18:22:25 GMT -5
My friend has dyslexia and I check his spelling for him all the time. I enjoy it (yes, I'm a spelling and grammar nerd!). I'm happy to check your work if you'd like.
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Post by Ray T on Apr 14, 2010 19:22:41 GMT -5
cool
but no laughing feel free to edit anything i write.
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Post by Ouch on Apr 14, 2010 23:30:20 GMT -5
Bananas, that was a fantastic story...and actually, I'm quite glad you ended it like you did - it was a fucking fantastic ending, actually even. I'm seriously impressed. I think we share a certain degree of writing style and the way in which we perceive things and also put our creativity into word and writing in particular.
Good work, and I think you sized it just right and knew when to end it. I enjoyed the work, and think that if you ever wanted you could definitely have success materially in writing, and while I think there have been multiple great writers on this sight, you are among the very few I consider elite on this site, and elite in the entire roster of writers (that are unsigned to my knowledge) I've have ever read.
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Post by ρɦoeɳix on Apr 15, 2010 3:10:04 GMT -5
I hate/like this ending  I hate that it had to end, both the story and the relationship (I really hate things that end  ) but I also agree with Gatchaman that it was written very good, and I liked that it ended differently from most other stories, and that it was realistic. Sometimes things end like this! Great work! ;D |
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Post by Ray T on Apr 15, 2010 13:08:42 GMT -5
But in life there is the on again off agoin relationship and the growing up and realising the good thing you had and wanting it back... theres needs to be a after SA say fast forward a few years... a chance meating... a spark , and wham a new story line. also retro books about the 2 years in SA for her and the time for him... i see a big money maker... lol
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Post by ρɦoeɳix on Apr 17, 2010 13:43:27 GMT -5
I miss this story I wish it didn't have to end!! Feel free to write another story  |
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Post by canadiandev on Apr 18, 2010 13:08:49 GMT -5
cool but no laughing feel free to edit anything i write. I would never laugh. Okay, maybe once or twice.  Seriously, if you have a story you'd like to post, you can send it to me first and I'll edit it for you before you post it. |
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Post by Ray T on Apr 19, 2010 8:48:20 GMT -5
Cool as soon as the waters go down. Oh wait I have not told you guys..
I live on the river and right now it is about 8 inches below flood stage with more rain in the forcast in the nect few days. I have about 10 feet of back yard left (3meter for you metric lovers) and the water has came up 2 feet sence yesterday at 6pm. So I am watching to see if I need to evac.
So as soon as things are back to normal I may take you up on the offer CD.
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I hate that it had to end, both the story and the relationship (I really hate things that end 
) but I also agree with Gatchaman that it was written very good, and I liked that it ended differently from most other stories, and that it was realistic. Sometimes things end like this! Great work! ;D
