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Post by Deleted on Jan 17, 2010 10:33:51 GMT -5
Hiya everyone,
I have just had my story up loaded into the fiction section. Hope it is ok. It is the first time I have let anyone see anything I've written as I pretty much write devo stuff. The chapter numbering went a bit array but never mind.
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Post by Lee on Jan 17, 2010 10:43:17 GMT -5
I think I fixed the chapter issues. It's a great story.
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Post by Dee Dee on Jan 18, 2010 0:29:49 GMT -5
Always happy to read new stories, I cannot write stories myself, so I´m glad that others can  . |
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Post by Ouch on Jan 18, 2010 5:11:46 GMT -5
Always happy to read new stories, I cannot write stories myself, so I´m glad that others can . Really? I would think you're fantastic at making up 'stories'. |
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Post by spurs2000 on Mar 20, 2011 12:19:55 GMT -5
Well I did my homework and have read your story. What a great first attempt. I love the scenario, a few things could have been given in better detail and certainly Jack seemed to be able to achieve certain things very easily but the strength of other aspects of the story kept it very readable from beginning to end. :-) Will enjoy reading more! :-)
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Post by Deleted on Mar 20, 2011 13:25:09 GMT -5
Thank you Spurs, A+ for effort. I thought my quad character was a bit inaccurate but never mind. At least I know now!
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Post by ruthmadison on Mar 20, 2011 14:16:37 GMT -5
Yay for new stories! I'm off to read it now  |
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Post by persephone on Mar 20, 2011 15:50:13 GMT -5
"Well I did my homework and have read your story." @ Spurs: So you didn't fancy detention then  |
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Post by spurs2000 on Mar 20, 2011 16:57:11 GMT -5
detention could be fun but really the storyline was strong and I enjoyed the read so as exactly the way I was pre-accident English literature, if I enjoyed the text to be studied I went to the lesson and did the homework required! :-) If the subject bored me I did not do it. :-) LOL
detention was sometimes fun dependent on who it was with, litter duty as punishment for smoking for example we had a good scam. My friends aunt and uncle had a daughter with Down's syndrome. When doing litter duty we could bunk over the fence go to my friends aunt's house, play hide and seek with their daughter for 20 min, smoke a couple of ciggies, and have a cup of tea, fill up our rubbish bag with household rubbish then throw it in the giant dustbin in front of the teacher looking like we have been very busy. :-) Everybody happy! :-)
@ Peresepnone : what would you detention involve?
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Post by persephone on Mar 21, 2011 2:40:01 GMT -5
Spurs, I'm way too good to have ever been in detention so I should imagine paint and drying would be involved in great measure.
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