ukhot20
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Post by ukhot20 on Dec 21, 2005 17:39:29 GMT -5
hey all u guys and gals, well i've been thinking for the last few months that i'd like to write something for the fiction section...so i've finally written part 1 of a story! gonna send it to lee soon, its called 'The Club' i'm planning it to be about 5 sections long, so look out for it! and please bear in mind that it's my first attempt so don't be too harsh on me!
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Post by wheelie37 on Dec 22, 2005 1:54:49 GMT -5
Not always. not many people commented on the dream weaver series?
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ukhot20
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Post by ukhot20 on Dec 22, 2005 13:18:49 GMT -5
actually, who's been writing Dream Weaver? i cant wait for an update!
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Post by Lee on Dec 22, 2005 15:32:37 GMT -5
With all that's going on here, I think it's hard for every story to get commented on. But I see the web stats and all the stories do have an audience.
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ukhot20
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Post by ukhot20 on Dec 24, 2005 11:42:13 GMT -5
ok Lee has posted my story...
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Post by eustace on Jan 21, 2006 10:51:00 GMT -5
I very much like "The Club" and hope that the author will post another chapter soon. I especially like the way the story is slowly and tentatively unfolding, giving some suspense to things.
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Post by BA on Jan 22, 2006 14:07:26 GMT -5
OK if if we don't get into Jake's pants real soon I am going to cream. Well, I'd cream anyway. What a story UK!
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Post by eustace on Jan 22, 2006 14:41:31 GMT -5
I have re-read the first two chapters of "The Club." I really love the little details that the author ukhot20 provides--such as the image of Jake carrying drinks from the bar to the table between his thighs. I have seen guys in chairs who tuck their wallets, drinks, pack of cigarettes, etc. between their legs. For some reason, I find this rather erotic,. I'm wondering if ukhot20 (or anyone one else out there) also finds this erotic. And I liked Rob's being turned on by Jake's wheeling gloves. I am hoping for more chapters soon!
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ukhot20
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Post by ukhot20 on Jan 22, 2006 20:06:03 GMT -5
hey, yeah i do find the little details real sexy. I'm working on the new chapter now so will be ready to post soon i hope!
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babs
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Post by babs on Jan 22, 2006 20:26:25 GMT -5
Hell yeah, it's sexy! My boyfriend also used to tuck his drink between his legs...or me. LOL
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Post by wheelie37 on Jan 23, 2006 5:13:06 GMT -5
I tuck beer between my legs when wheeling in bar , but dont do it with hot cups of tea or coffee
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babs
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Post by babs on Jan 23, 2006 5:42:36 GMT -5
hmmmm really.... (places drink between his legs and pushes towards fridge for another)
Really... I guess if you stick around here long enough you can pick up a thing or two... ;D
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Post by wheelie37 on Jan 23, 2006 5:51:02 GMT -5
anything else you want to know?
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