ukhot20
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Post by ukhot20 on Dec 25, 2005 6:44:17 GMT -5
had anyone read my story 'The Club' yet?
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Post by Lee on Dec 26, 2005 16:03:06 GMT -5
Hey, I know it's the holidays and all, but if anyone has read ukhot20's story, please give feedback. Like they say on Secret Garden, none of the contributors get paid money, so your comments are the only payment they get.
I thought the story was great and I hope to hear more about Jake in the future.
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Post by rollerboylover on Dec 26, 2005 20:51:42 GMT -5
I haven't been around for a while but seeing as ukhot20 needs reviews on the story then I must post. I think the story is great. The only problem I have is that there isn't more of it ! Please write more and post it soon.
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ukhot20
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Post by ukhot20 on Dec 26, 2005 21:11:32 GMT -5
Thanks for the positive comments lee and roller! whether i wrote more depended on how all you members commented on it, as i've got some good feedback i will write chapter 2 tommorow night!
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Post by Robbb on Dec 27, 2005 11:20:35 GMT -5
Hi UK,
Great story, but I neeeeeeed more of it. Quickly.
R.
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Post by rollerboylover on Dec 27, 2005 13:46:39 GMT -5
Thanks for the positive comments lee and roller! whether i wrote more depended on how all you members commented on it, as i've got some good feedback i will write chapter 2 tommorow night! Yeahh!! Can't wait!! Thanks.
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Post by V on Dec 27, 2005 14:14:13 GMT -5
Although I'm not much into gay themed stuff, it's a very well-written story, uk. Good stuff!
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Post by BA on Dec 27, 2005 16:46:54 GMT -5
OK, uhot20, that story was very, very HOT! I have a confession to make. I find very few things "over the top" sexy. They are as follows:
1. A hot guy in a wheelchair.
2. Two hot guys, of which one is in a chair. Even as a hetero female, I do love gay fantasy and fiction.
3. Guys from the UK. I have a Brit. guy fetish too.
OK, so you have hit on all my spots here. I confess! More story please!
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Post by Leilia on Dec 27, 2005 16:59:16 GMT -5
yes .....more please!
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ukhot20
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Post by ukhot20 on Dec 27, 2005 18:22:05 GMT -5
wow! so many good comments! thanks guys! well ive started on part 2 so i will carry on now!
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Post by guest on Dec 28, 2005 11:51:01 GMT -5
Hi,
thanks a lot for your great story ukhot20. Can't wait for the next chapters!
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ukhot20
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Post by ukhot20 on Dec 29, 2005 17:43:55 GMT -5
hey all you guys, hope you're all well. i've just sent lee the next part of The Club, hope you like it!
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Post by vivi on Dec 29, 2005 18:54:04 GMT -5
I hope he posts it soon! I really liked their first encounter too and I'm looking forward to see what else happens.
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Post by Lee on Dec 31, 2005 1:02:36 GMT -5
Just posted....
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Post by vivi on Dec 31, 2005 15:17:57 GMT -5
Ukhot20, it gets better and better! Now you have to let us know what happens... I hope you are writing chapter 3 already!
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