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Cruelty
May 23, 2013 0:10:09 GMT -5
Post by Ath on May 23, 2013 0:10:09 GMT -5
“Marry me” You said with a low voice. Spoken words that could not be taken back. You did not get down on one knee or present me with a sparkling diamond ring. You were lying in your bed, with a blanket to your chin. The only spark was in your golden eyes and that too was slowly fading. You knew I couldn't say it, that things would never be the same.
How could we be so cruel.
How could you ask of me, to be a widow at 16. Like it didn't hurt enough. How could you offer me everything, knowing it would be taken away. How could I deny you all you ever wanted, as well as your last wish.
How could we be so cruel.
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Cruelty
May 24, 2013 15:43:56 GMT -5
Post by lisa on May 24, 2013 15:43:56 GMT -5
Planned on doing a little board break, but this piece didn't want to go out of my head.
I have no words for it though. Plain beautiful, horrible silence.
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Post by lavly on May 24, 2013 19:44:29 GMT -5
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Cruelty
May 24, 2013 23:14:19 GMT -5
Post by Valkyrja on May 24, 2013 23:14:19 GMT -5
WOW... no words!
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Cruelty
May 27, 2013 20:59:01 GMT -5
Post by Pony on May 27, 2013 20:59:01 GMT -5
I dig this...good opening up!!
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Cruelty
May 27, 2013 22:33:57 GMT -5
Post by Ath on May 27, 2013 22:33:57 GMT -5
thank you all
yes it does kind of fall flat in the end.. there is always more to the story so maybe I will add more... but it might also take the power out of it...
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Cruelty
Jun 10, 2013 9:24:58 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jun 10, 2013 9:24:58 GMT -5
good hook - want to turn the page
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