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Jun 11, 2013 0:25:44 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2013 0:25:44 GMT -5
another piece of wip fallen fruit maybe some can relate
Hear my silent scream. I am overcome by an accumulation of quiet lies to crushing proportion. His lies consume everything that is good between us; a cancer that eats the healthy flesh of trust and life blood of love, Unspoken deception is poured from countless wine bottles. Cell phone secrets extract a toll as well. I've played the lonely where-is-he game too often. Deep chronic emotional wounds are my legacy of lovers lies. Hear my silent scream.
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Jun 12, 2013 14:11:11 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jun 12, 2013 14:11:11 GMT -5
few reads no comments
that bad ?
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Jun 13, 2013 15:57:44 GMT -5
Post by BA on Jun 13, 2013 15:57:44 GMT -5
Oh, I liked that. If it comes from personal experience all I can say is OUCH! Has this been a 'theme' for you in relationships, one guy or is it something made just for poetic appreciation?
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Jun 13, 2013 17:56:46 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2013 17:56:46 GMT -5
thnks for your comment no, I had a long run at a "perfect" relationship with the love of my life for almost 30 years then I got m.s. in a wheelchair he became abusive I barely escaped with my life (3 mo hosp/rehab and 1yr visiting nurse for wound care) this piece is an excerpt from my work in progress book - fallen fruit
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