Not explicit stories (read with accent)

[malibu]

I took all courage to post my very first story today, hope this is okay. 

CONSIDERATIONS

(a) Although it´s not explicit, but I´d like to remark that one wheeler and one dev played a relevant role (XXX).

(b) It really makes sense to read with a strong hispanic accent. You can either adopt one from devious maids or try to convince me to read it out loud for you, but I´d probably ruin it.

(c) No real penguin got hurt.

STORY:

Dear deception island,

Your penguins witnessed today the sophisticated art of making L´AMOUR! In a complete new form, never seen before. (XXX)
Look! They are reproducing it now. They are indeed reproducing. (literally)
I can observe even the finest art of MÉNAGE! Tripled penguins. 
AW...some threesome....four.....some....AWesome....AW!
Some so desperately! As if they knew it. You know it too, don´t you, deception island?

You´re laughing? It is indeed hilarious. Look at those fucking penguins!

Now you´re crying? Wanna lick your melting ice away. hmm. ... So warm. ... So bitter! 

Have you unloved to, deception island? 
I can taste tears. Those never cried though. Those swallowed down. Cutting. Like broken glass. Swallowed tears. Or blood?

You´re so broken now, my beloved deception island. So red...
Why?
Sun down. Penguins high!
[They are currently reaching their best climax.]

LOL

It´s the end of the day. 
The penguins. (from which there have been many)
Of love. (such a drama)
Oh, it´s your end too, deception! Island no more. Sublimed deception.
Am I really breathing deception, come on.

One copy of this letter has been sent in a bottle, which you´ll never receive. Obviously.

Yours sincerely,

True love island

P.S.: Jokes meant to break the ice. Not supposed to break your heart. 


FINAL CONSIDERATIONS

A few penguins made it to neighbouring islands. Two of them landed on the true love island. They will be fine. I guess they just need to get used to each other but since they look all pretty much the same this shouldn´t be a problem. Wait I can hear them talking. The female (her name´s coke) asks the male (he´s jack) something.

COKE: How hard must it be to lose someone you had affection for. .... hard, hard, hard.
JACK: Yeah. Wanna fuck?
COKE: hard, hard, hard.

THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



FINAL CONSIDERATIONS:

(a) The islands in the story are fictious. The penguins on the real deception island in antarctic are very well and as far as I can see, quite monogamous. The fathers even seem to help raising the kids, so sweet. <3

(b) I´m aware, it´s crazy. 

(c) hope you liked.

[FlyingBert]

I'm from Perú, but I'm not sure about my accent. How can I know it? LOL

"One copy of this letter has been sent in a bottle, which you´ll never receive"

I'll remember that line.

[malibu]

Jul 18, 2016 13:35:26 GMT -5 FlyingBert said:

I'm from Perú, but I'm not sure about my accent. How can I know it? LOL

"One copy of this letter has been sent in a bottle, which you´ll never receive"

I'll remember that line.

The accent thing was actually just to keep in mind it was not a native English speaker who wrote the story lol.
Hahaha you will remember this line next time you find a letter in a bottle?

[FlyingBert]

There was an old webpage to allow anyone to write whatever and let it free in a virtual bottle. I used to write there, just like screaming in a cave. Now I write in PD hehe

[midwestguy]

Ok malibu, I'll admit it, and I can't be the only one, I don't get it. And I tried it with a Dezi Arnez accent.
Maybe I need a few Jack & Cokes for it to sink in...

[malibu]

I drew it for clarification purposes lol no, not really...

midwestguy, I must admit I haven´t quite understood my own story, but I really see a lot of potential in those penguins.
It´s a bit like a poem, needs interpretation I guess LOL 

[Paradise]

It's beautiful. I can feel the longing behind your words. This one is a sad love story, I think. I like the picture too. It seems sad. But it's still beautiful. I understand, not being able to reach out and touch someone you love.

Edited to add: Well, I didn't see the part about the penguins fucking at the end, but that's cool too.

[midwestguy]

Jul 19, 2016 11:22:47 GMT -5 malibu said:

I drew it for clarification purposes lol no, not really...

midwestguy , I must admit I haven´t quite understood my own story, but I really see a lot of potential in those penguins.
It´s a bit like a poem, needs interpretation I guess LOL 

After a google search, a few read-throughs, and an artistic rendering, it's starting to coalesce.
At least I get the fucking at the end
Thanks!

[malibu]

Attachment Deleted drew it at jogging speed