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Post by Deleted on May 20, 2018 6:06:49 GMT -5
Who do I see? A devotee? Come on over…come sit with me I’ll give you a lift as you start to drift Back at my house, the mood starts to shift As you lay on your back, I feed you some snacks My heart pounds hard…it’s a heart attack! As you take off your shirt and begin to flirt… I pull you closer and lift up your skirt As my fingers roam all over your ass I quietly think…finally…at last! You begin to giggle as I rub your nipple This turns me on so I start to tickle I tickle your body with only my pinky We both decide that it’s time to get kinky What happens next is anyone’s guess I suppose by now, you want to know the rest? Nobody yet can claim this story Perhaps it is YOU who will give me that glory? - KM  |
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May 20, 2018 9:15:01 GMT -5
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Post by shape on May 20, 2018 9:15:01 GMT -5
I am just wondering, @krypticmonkey... Wouldn't it be better if you just create one thread, and share all your poems there? I'm not sure this is the right way to do it, but it's obvious that you have much more art to share and doing it this other way you wouldn't be stealing the folder... Or maybe including your name in the title?... Just my opinion
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Post by Deleted on May 20, 2018 14:32:29 GMT -5
I am just wondering, @krypticmonkey ... Wouldn't it be better if you just create one thread, and share all your poems there? I'm not sure this is the right way to do it, but it's obvious that you have much more art to share and doing it this other way you wouldn't be stealing the folder... Or maybe including your name in the title?... Just my opinion I’m not sure what the “right way to do it” is either…I see other members here with multiple posts using multiple threads so I naturally assumed it was okay to follow accordingly. Oh, and...btw...it's nice to meet you Shape. |
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May 20, 2018 14:55:35 GMT -5
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Post by shape on May 20, 2018 14:55:35 GMT -5
I am just wondering, @krypticmonkey ... Wouldn't it be better if you just create one thread, and share all your poems there? I'm not sure this is the right way to do it, but it's obvious that you have much more art to share and doing it this other way you wouldn't be stealing the folder... Or maybe including your name in the title?... Just my opinion I’m not sure what the “right way to do it” is either…I see other members here with multiple posts using multiple threads so I naturally assumed it was okay to follow accordingly. Oh, and...btw...it's nice to meet you Shape. Ok, it was just a comment, as I see you have a lot to share... And aloha! Read a few posts but didn't see the intro until now... I'm a bit unfocused 😆, that's why I ask to gather it all in a folder, or post with your name... Welcome |
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Post by Deleted on May 20, 2018 15:04:51 GMT -5
No worries Shape. Thx.
Do you still live in Spain?
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May 20, 2018 16:35:19 GMT -5
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Post by shape on May 20, 2018 16:35:19 GMT -5
No worries Shape. Thx. Do you still live in Spain? Yep, Spain, North. Asturias, if you want to check and see a beautiful land, not the same as Hawaii, but still beautiful 😉 |
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Post by lucretia on May 20, 2018 18:44:37 GMT -5
As a poet, I think each poem having its own thread is as appropriate as each story having its own thread.
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Post by gimpygay on Jun 27, 2018 3:32:57 GMT -5
I agree Lucetia.I very much enjoy erotic poetry.
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Post by britishtetra on Jun 27, 2018 6:30:44 GMT -5
Hello, I have recently completed a online poetry course, mainly because I write poetry all the time. Mine is more about the war, past and other subjects.
How long did it take you to write it?
Have you tried writing instead of rhyming AABB… A B A B…
I’ve never tried to write erotic poetry, do many people enjoy reading it?
Pete
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