WooHoo! Update!

[lisa]

Lee,

Finally! I thought I would die of anticipation. Great segment and nice little tease at the end.

The "action" crowd will be very, very pleased.

[obscure]

-- Gurgle --

-- Twitch --

OH MY GOD YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT HANGING LIKE THAT! AIEEEE!

No, okay. Brilliant update. I enjoyed every second of it. Now I'm going to go back and read it about twenty more times. Thanks, Lee!

[DevBoy]

Well its a step in the right direction, but eating pussy doesn't exactly fit into MY sexual interests... <sigh>
Where was the promised reciprocation, Lee?

[princess]

Don't listen to him-- you just keep on with the pussy eating. (Not that I'm opposed to a nice blowjob scene either...)

So this was me: biting my nails with concern for Lise, tapping my foot all annoyed at Elliot, all turned on and hot, about to stand up in my computer chair, screaming, "OMFG, Lee, you ROCK," and then... "What the hell is this shit? Are you seriously cutting me off here?"

Really, Lee? Just like that? When the aneuryism you just created ruptures in the night, and I die, I hope you feel horribly guilty.

[Lee]

princess said:

Don't listen to him-- you just keep on with the pussy eating.

Hmm... that sounds familiar

[princess]

Come to think of it, it really does.
(I guess that's why the term "dirty bi-sexual" exists, hm?)

[DevBoy]

Lee, listen to princess; write a nice bj scene in there! who cares if she marries him? the true test of her love is the bj. trust me, as a guy, I know.

[princess]

It's true. There's no way you can claim to be in love with a man and not blow him once in a while.

[Lee]

Hmm... a cute redheaded girl who loves blowing guys. Princess, what the hell does your husband see in you??


Princess wrote a great sex scene. Upcoming....

[princess]

Well, not just "guys" in general, Lee. A girl has to have standards, taste... that was not meant as a pun. Pervert.